Open Question: Is it true that statistics can be used as a weapon or used as a medicine instead?
For example, if you conducted a study correlating black people with incidences of criminal activity - wouldn’t this be a weapon against them because the statistics are targeted to defame them?
On the other hand, if you conducted a statistics that correlated people who have a certain disease with a particular talent that such people tend to have, wouldn’t this be encouraging and a healing medicine to broken hearts?
Fri, 26 Dec 2008 05:53:57 GMT
Resolved Question: What do you think of the beginning of this novella?
This is just for fun and to help me overcome writers block for my novel. I don’t think that it’s as good as my novel but I still think that it’s okay. Is the ending too harsh? It’s not the ending of the story, just the ending of that small section….Thank you!
?Sophie, it?s time to go.? My sister slowly turned her face towards the sounds of my voice. She was lying flat on her bed, her long platinum blonder hair fanned out around her, and a book lying open on her chest. I sighed when I saw the book. I don?t know why she even bothered, it wasn?t like she could even read it.
But then I saw which book it was, and I knew why she had it lying on her chest, close to her heart. It was a book of nursery rhymes that our mom had used to read us when we were little. The cover was a bright emerald green and the title was written in large, raised, golden letters. Her long fingers on the right hand traced the pattern of the words ceaselessly.
?Dad wants to get on the road before traffic hits,? I added, hoping that it would speed up the amount of time that she took to rouse herself from bed. Sophie nodded slowly and pulled herself upright; the book slid from her chest to the floor. She swung her skinny legs off the bed and stood up painstakingly slow.
As she began walking, her foot caught the very book that had just slid from her chest, and she fell to the floor. She hard landed on her knees and hands. I heard the slap of her palms hitting the floor. Ouch. That must have stung.
I knelt beside her and reached out to help her up, but the moment my fingers brushed her arm she jerked away as if electrocuted. I pulled back quickly.
?I can stand up by myself, Emily, you don?t need to help me,? she spat, pulling herself unsteadily to her feet.
?Sorry,? I murmured. ?I was just trying to help.?
?Well don?t,? she snapped.
?Fine,? I snarled. ?Make your way through this mess without someone guiding you.? I gestured to the cluttered floor, forgetting that she would not be able to see my hand motion.
Sophie?s face stiffened as she realized that she did indeed need my help. Then she thrust her chin out and began walking forward. I pressed my lips together, folded my arms, and counted how many things she tripped over. One. Two. Three?
She finally made it to the doorway, tripping a grand total of nine times. I rolled my eyes. Her room was such a disaster. You?d think that a blind girl would keep her floor clean. But not Sophie. No, Sophie was Sophie, and she did whatever she pleased. Whether is made sense or not.
I trailed after Sophie as she made her way down the hall. She knew the pattern, the layout of the whole house by heart, it was just her room that got her. I almost laughed at the irony of it all.
?Sophie,? my dad greeted my sister warmly. ?Nice to see you up and about.? Sophie glared and didn?t say anything. My dad?s smiling face fell a bit but then he looked up at me. ?Ready?? I nodded.
?Ready.? Dad reached out and took Sophie?s hand, she jerked away and headed out the front door by herself. I touched Dad?s hand lightly, trying to reassure him. He looked at me and frowned slightly, as if it were my fault that Sophie was being so difficult.
?She?s just having a hard time adjusting,? he said, sounding weary. ?Don?t you go making it any harder on her.? I lowered my eyes and didn?t say anything. Sophie was a lost cause, and I knew it. Dad on the other hand?well, everything was my fault. Nothing the little princess did was ever wrong.
Sophie had lost her sight in the car accident that had killed our mother. Mom, Sophie, and I were in the car driving home from a New Year?s Eve party. Dad hadn?t gone to the party because he had had to work. A drunk driver sped through the light and hit a patch of ice. I remember seeing a flash of light and feeling pain everywhere. Then the darkness claimed me. I had woken up three days later in the hospital.
Mom hadn?t survived, Sophie was in a coma, but it was I who was the lucky one. I had a huge gash running down the length of my arm and a concussion, but that was pretty much it. I had always wondered why it wasn?t me who had died or had gone into a coma and woken up blind. Why me?
My fingers absently traced the white scar that disfigured my right arm. My dad saw the motion and looked away quickly. I knew that tears had sprung into his eyes. I hurried away before I could cause him anymore pain.
Sophie was leaning against the car, a scowl on her face and her arms crossed across her skinny chest. ?I thought you said that you were ready?? she asked crossly. I ignored her and pulled the door open. Sophie climbed in first and I followed closely behind.
I tugged the seatbelt down and clicked it in. Sophie pulled at hers for a moment until finally it released and she was able to latch it into place. She placed her feet on the back of the seat and slumped down low.
?Why do we even have to go to this stupid cabin anyway?? she asked. ?Maybe I don?t want to spend my summer
in the middle of nowhere with God knows what horrible creatures.?
?Oh stop whining,? I snapped. Dad climbed into the car at that very moment and twisted back in his seat, glaring at me.
?Don?t talk to your sister like that, Emily,? he said, sounding angry. Sophie smirked and I fumed silently. Don?t talk to me that way, Dad, I?m not a baby. I?m seventeen years old and I have ten times the maturity that you do. Who kept the family going after Mom died? Not you, that?s for damn sure.
?Yeah, Emily,? Sophie murmured out of the side of her mouth.
?You?re seventeen, act like it,? I hissed at her. Sophie glared and turned away and Dad frowned in the rearview mirror.
?Emily,? he said in a warning voice. I hate you, I thought bitterly. Then I instantly felt bad. What if we got in a car accident and Dad died, just like mom had? What if the last thought I ever about him was that I hated him. I love you, I corrected internally. You?re just infuriating sometimes.
I closed my eyes and lea
leaned my head against the window. The glass felt warm beneath my cheek, it was uncomfortable, so I pulled away. I turned my head and looked at my sister. Sophie was leaning against the window, her eyes shut, her arms still folded and her feet still propped up. Her thin mouth was set into a pout. Get over yourself, I felt like saying to her. Quite wallowing in self pity.
It was amazing how different Sophie and I looked; you could hardly tell that we were related, let alone twins. Well, fraternal twins, but still, even most fraternal twins share at least some resemblance. Not me and Sophie.
I was very tall and willowy, with gentle curves and more of a roundness to my features. Sophie, on the other hand, was average height, thought perhaps a little shorter than she should be, and had sharp, jutting features. Each was thin and angular as if carved with a steady hand from a block of ice.
Sophie had fair skin, but with a definite tan to it, whereas I had no color at all. We both wore o
our hair long, falling down our backs and too our waist. Mine was a dark chocolate brown and Sophie?s a bright platinum blonde. Her eyes were a light, icy blue, mine a bright green.
Sophie?s head snapped up to face me. ?I can feel you staring,? she said angrily. ?Stop it.? I turned away and closed my eyes. I hate you, I thought. And this time I didn?t feel guilty.
Oh…and Merry Christmas!
Because I wanted to post it again. Is that illegal?
Sorry, that was kind of rude, I just wanted more opinions
Huh, I’ve never heard of that novel. No, I just came up with the idea on my own. The novel I’m writing is a fantasy and I decided to do something more real. I dunno, writing a story about someone who’s blind has always appealed to me.
I did email you. It said it worked….
You don’t have to click on it…
Wed, 24 Dec 2008 23:15:29 GMT