Open Question: Can you help me write these sentences in a different way?
I’m trying my best to change as much sentences as I can, its for my English project.
for Example:
original sentence: Sudden and severe weight loss. This is the first symptom most people think of when they hear the word anorexia, but really it just one of many signs of anorexia.
Changed: Although sudden and severe weight lose is just one of many signs of anorexia, it is the first symptom most people think of when they hear the word anorexia.
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I need your help to finish these, Im not asking you to do all of them.. but as much as you can. But please to it perfectly.. an English project requires proper English.
2.Obsessing about food, weight, and/or appearance. People with anorexia can often tell you just how many calories and fat grams are in a wide number of foods. They may weigh themselves several times a day. They often believe they are fat, even when they are severely underweight.
3.Preoccupation with food. In addition to knowing the number of calories in different foods, anorexic people may cook for others, collect recipes, and so on. They just won?t eat themselves. Many of the anorexia 10 signs have to do with the preoccupation with food.
4.Withdrawal from social situations, especially those involving food. People with anorexia often avoid eating in public. They also want to avoid situations in which others might express concern about their eating habits or their weight.
5.Lying about their weight and how much food they eat. People with anorexia may pretend to eat in order to avoid confrontations about their condition. They may also insist that they are not hungry, even when it?s been a long time since their last meal.
6.Strange eating habits, such as cutting food a certain way or only eating one food. Anorexic people may experience severe anxiety if their rituals are interrupted or questioned.
7.Health problems. People with anorexia are subject to a large number of health problems, including weakness, dizziness, and lethargy. These problems are likely due in part to low blood pressure. Another sign you might notice is lack or menstruation. There are many other health problems anorexic people can suffer, but many are not noticeable unless they visit a physician. These can be quite serious problems, though, like osteoporosis (bone loss), liver disease, kidney disease, and a weakened heart muscle that can lead to cardiac arrest. Health problems are one of the more serious signs of anorexia.
8.Abusing diet pills and/or laxatives. In order to help them lose weight faster, many anorexic people turn to pills. Diet pills, or course, suppress the appetite. Laxatives cause food to move through the system faster, and so fewer calories are absorbed.
9.Vomiting after eating. This is actually a sign of bulimia, which is another form of eating disorder, but it often goes along with anorexia. Because of that, it is included in the list of anorexia 10 signs.
10.Exercising excessively. Many people with anorexia will exercise excessively in order to help them lose more weight. As they become sicker from the disease, however, their ability to exercise decreases. They simply don?t have the energy to do it anymore.

Tue, 20 Apr 2010 19:21:06 GMT

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