Open Question: My poem Why oh why longer version?
Why oh why
My gf cheated I barely cried
I prayed wisdom
she acted dumb
I felt heated
because she cheated
my new best friend is captain crunch
I ate some for lunch
my car is my new wife
at least she will not hurt me in this life
now i lift weights
everything in my life is going to be straight
I dont worry about finding a mate
I almost was a sucker for a girl who was using me for bait
She thought I was going to be the one to sit around while she partied and wait
She never thought I would confront face to face
She was hurt when I dumped her at her place
She tried to chase
But the other guy was in her place
Sitting on the couch
Stuffing his mouth
A part of me said now I can get a hotter woman than her
One who could make my heart purrrrrrrrr
Or maybe skip a beat like a heart murmur
Life was getting stupid
Oh no I just killed cupid
now my heart is in closed in an armored pod
Time for me to get closer with god
Maybe it is time for me to see
that there really are more fishes in the sea
Too bad I dont have a net lol
What do you guys/gals think about it
I made this up in like 3 mins bit this happened for real
Is this any good?
This is my revised longer version lol
I know there are grammar errors I was typing fast lol. But this is true lol. I can laugh at myself lol
@Jlynch
I have more poems lol.
I had some on my deviantart page back in the day lol
An internet poet should be a career
I have some for days lol
@Thatman
I know you heard the term sleep with the fishes
lol. Famous line lol
Jlynch
Lol
wow
violent lol
lol
@ Chelly
you are funny lol
My female friends was like wow she lost a good man. My family was like yeah she messed up badly
I dont cheat. I did ons for her. Maybe too much.
That is what I get for being dependable lol.
lol. Because of this I started working out in a way lol. I almost want to thank her lol!
Thu, 18 Sep 2008 06:05:38 GMT
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