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Open Question: I just wrote a song. Do you think the lyrics are good?

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Open Question: I just wrote a song. Do you think the lyrics are good?
My song is called I can do this. here are the lyrics:
They all said I couldn’t do it
My instincts said I’d not get through it
And if I could I’d finish last
But I can’t help myself
When my heart starts beating fast
[Chorus 1]
I’ll do this on my own
I’ll do this on my own
There’s a chance and I will take it
Even if I might not make it
But I - I work alone ohhhh
I’ll square my feet I’ll stay hardcore
And when I win you’ll all want more
I don’t think I will be the same
When my friends gasp at
The slight murmur of my name
[Chorus 2]
I’ll be okay
I’ll be okay
I know that one day I’ll break through
Cuz there is nothing I can’t do
NOW!
I feel warm victory on my face
I know I’m in my rightful place
I hope that all the crowd can see
That I could do this thing
It’s only me ohhhh
[Chorus 1]
You see the victor I have become
The games are over and I’ve won
You owe an apology
Cuz in the end they realized
I could always do this thing!
[Chorus 2]
[Chorus 1]
BY THE WAY I CAN SING TOO
seriously this song has a tune people and i can sing!!!!!!

Sun, 06 Sep 2009 16:20:31 GMT

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