January 30th, 2009 | by admin |
Open Question: I need an opinion on a poem.?
My friend wrote this poem (and yes, it’s really my friend, not just me pretending. Haha.) and she wanted a completely unknown third party opinion of it because she doesn’t believe my critiques, haha.. So…yeah. Haha here it is. (And be completely honest. She wants the straight-up truth.)
You’re a drug.
Pumping through my veins,
built up a tolerance.
The less I have, the more I need.
I’m addicted, like a drug.
Like a bug, I’m infected.
The more I inhale, the sicker I get.
Caught you like a cold,
tainting my heart, body, soul.
You’re a disease.
Fri, 30 Jan 2009 04:41:59 GMT
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