Open Question: Do you think my story is any good?
So please be nice about this, I’m only 15… Maybe some constructive critasisim please.
So first here’s the plot just some light details (if you wish to read a more thorough description here is the link- http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=Aok8oHRKbA1wUWbmhtXHA2Hsy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20100813090700AAQZLWJ
1. Gracelynn Daniels moves home to LA from Scotland
2. At a BBQ her aunt set up, she talks to guy, Zeph Ellis, who she has had brief encounters with
3. They flirt and realize they really like each other, and have several ‘non date’ meetings
4. Strange, dangerous things begin to happen as soon as they become official
5. Zeph feels guilty as he knows it’s his fault that Gracelynns life is in danger
6. In short, he is a fallen angel who had a passionate fling with a mortal called Delilah (illegal back then) in 1000B.C. Then he fell in love with Gracelynn from a past life and ended up having to kill her as he was blackmailed.
7. King Tobias found out about Zeph and Delilah’s murder. Zeph fell and Delilah was sent to the underworld with Hades to become a succubus.
8. Gracelynn breaks up with Zeph cause she thinks he’s cuckoo, but gets back together after a near death experience with Delilah.
9. They fall in love and talk about moving in together, Delilah finds out about this and seeks revenge on both! What will happen?!…
Here is a little snippet when Gracelynn is having a ‘flashback dream’ (but she just thinks it’s a normal, recurring, dream at this point)
She stood graciously in front of the antique mirror in her frothy white dress, the tuneful murmur of a harp sounding close by. The thought that Gracelynn was going to marry the man she treasured within a matter of minutes sent goosebumps over her skin.
A handmaiden dressed in an aquatic blue, swishing gown slotted in the flowing veil and sapphire incrusted tiara into the loose bun on Gracelynn?s head. She collected the posy of lavenders and glided out of the small chamber and outside to the courtyard.
There he was, standing under the arch of roses, smiling obsessively toward Gracelynn. Tears of happiness tumbled down her face as she came closer and closer toward the man of her dreams, and the religious elder in waxen robes.
He held his hands out for her to join and their fingers intertwined with ease. They held each other in a tight embrace that was so perfectly normal, so familiar that they never thought of anything of it, other than magical.
?We shall begin.? The priestly gentleman called toward the sky as if he were asking for God. ?Prendre ton coeur les uns des autres et maintenez le sang de l?
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