Open Question: What do you think of these two songs I just wrote?
please, be brutal.
maybe its The way your hair falls in your face
but you bring me back to earth when im in space
your laugh brings joy to my soul
you the second half of my whole
I saved your message on my voicemail to hear you everyday
i think about you in every possible way
get on my computer just too see if youre on are too
oh but boy how can you not see i want to be with you
I wear my heart on my sleeve
for all to see
oh but please never leave me
when we talk were the only people in the universe
if this crush was a disease each day id get worse
your perfect to me in every way
i couldnt deal with you being away
I saved your message on my voicemail to hear you everyday
i think about you in every possible way
get on my computer just too see if youre on are too
oh but boy how can you not see i want to be with you
I wear my heart on my sleeve
for all to see
oh but please never leave me
is it not obvious that ive fallen for you
you have so much value
is it that sparkle in your eyes
or your character no need for a disguise
I saved your message on my voicemail to hear you everyday
i think about you in every possible way
get on my computer just too see if youre on are too
oh but boy how can you not see i want to be with you
I wear my heart on my sleeve
for all to see
oh but please never leave me
Everytime i see your smiling face
im longing for your embrace
Will you leave me that’s my scare
or is it true you really care
Your just like my september rain
falling slowly on my window pane
Your just like my october hurricane
when Im with you I can’t complain
Your just like my november breeze
when I’m with you won’t time freeze
your just like my december snow
I never want to say goodbye only hello
When I’m with you everyday’s a holiday
When Im with you i cant breathe you block my airway
on my wall your a abstract painting
complicated yet so breathtaking
Your just like my september rain
falling slowly on my window pane
Your just like my october hurricane
when Im with you I can’t complain
Your just like my november breeze
when I’m with you won’t time freeze
your just like my december snow
I never want to say goodbye only hello
I love the way you talk to me
together we can be set free
we’re perfect for each other its true
when with you we both grew
Your just like my september rain
falling slowly on my window pane
Your just like my october hurricane
when Im with you I can’t complain
Your just like my november breeze
when I’m with you won’t time freeze
your just like my december snow
I never want to say goodbye only hello
Yea, your right. I shouldn’t rhyme for ever line.
career? I’m 13. hahaha
I’m not in love!

Sun, 05 Oct 2008 05:01:36 GMT

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