Open Question: What do you think of this bittersweet love writing sample? It is based on my experience…?
I found it was easier to write it in 3rd person. I am curious what you think. I don’t typically write much for pleasure, but just kind of felt like it. Thanks for your opinions and feedback!
Backround info: at the end of a cruise, both are teenagers (17 yrs old), on the last day- prob the last time we will see eachother
She looked up at him, deep into his warm brown eyes. He gently pulled her towards him playfully as he wrapped his arms around her. Having felt the tension in her body he whispered softly in her ear, ?You?re nervous??
And she murmured back hesitantly the truth. ?I?m not ready to have my first kiss yet.?
Slowly reaching up to tenderly to stroke her cheek, he sighed and responded. ?That?s ok. Whoever he is, he will be very lucky and special to have won your heart.?
?That doesn?t mean it wouldn?t have been you.?
And with that, he pulled her close and kissed her softly on the cheek and forehead before releasing her for a final goodbye.
Sun, 29 Aug 2010 20:43:56 GMT
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