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Open Question: What Do You Think Of This Poem? Harsh If Needed For Input Please :)?

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Open Question: please help me find this….?
I currently finished watching the Japanese drama 1 Liter of Tears. I must say I cried my heart out on this one. This is based of a true story about a 15 year old girl who was diagnosed with spinocereberall degenerative disease (brain disorder). The story is based on her diary about struggling with the progression of her disease and accepting her condition. For those who wants a good cry watch this 11 episode drama here http://www.onlinedrama.net/516.vid. After watching this drama I have learned how to appreciate my life, health, and the people around me. It was the best 11 hours I spend online watching this story. After watching this movie I wanted to know to those familiar with the actual published diary, has it ever been translated in English because I would like to read it so badly.
P.S. if anybody decide to watch the drama make sure you are prepared to open your heart about the story of AYA IKEUCHI and be prepared to cry a lot.

Thu, 09 Oct 2008 06:43:45 GMT
Open Question: What Do You Think Of This Poem? Harsh If Needed For Input Please :)?
Okay, So I Was trying To Say How I Had Met My First Love And It Was Correct Choice Because I Love Her… Well I Got There, But It Just Didn’t Click In My Mind Without Telling Every Part So I Had To COmbine this With My Previous poem, Maybe Adding A Little Bit More ——————————————————————
Dear Miss Heart,
The First Time I Saw You,
Your Face Bloomed Like A Sweet Smelling Flower,
And Stole My Heart,
My Face Turned Pale As Wax.
I Began Walking Somewhat Unsteadily,
Like A Blind Man Feeling His Way,
And When You Looked Towards Me,
I Felt My Life Melting Like The Stars In June.
My Heart, A Stone
Beating As A Drum.
Blood Rushed To My Head Fast As A Cyclone,
Overwhelming,
It Staggered My Eyes.
I Could See Almost Nothing,
But, I Had To See,
Your Sweet And Supple Face,
That Stood So Close Before Me.
My Heart Began To Pour Out From Inside,
Like The Rending See In A Passionate Wave On Wave,
Barely Able To Say Your Name,
Until I Reached The Content Of Your Every Aspect,
Talking And Thinking Became Easy As Reading The Open Page Of A Monthly Magazine…
Your Eyes, Gray And Green,
An April Day.
Your Hair, Golden Tints Of Sunrise,
Dropped On Cheeks As Honey-Seaweed,
Falling Like Flowers From Paradise.
Soft As Thoughts Of Budding Love.
Your Lips, Smooth As Twilight Water,
Lovely Song That Ripples As It Flows,
And The Smile You Use,
Fills Up The Silence as if Speech,
Your Cheeks,
July Peaches.
An Ardent Face,
An Out-Looking Star.
A Mystery; Soft, Soothing , And Gentle,
The Whisper Of A Child Murmuring Happiness In Sleep.
A Voice the sound of the Sea
Speaking Words soft As Rain
Your Laugh,
A Rainbow-Tinted Spray.
A Rose In Bloom.
Love Smiled Like An Unclouded Sun.
Sorry For Initial Cap…. Try To Stop But Not Working =/