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heart disease what else? can it cause ADDH in kids?

Sun, 20 Dec 2009 04:19:38 GMT
Open Question: What do you think of this extract?
This extract is between Rosie and X(can’t think of a name for him.if you have any Ideas tell me pls). They are the last two people awake(they think) left in the world. In this extract they both have reached the school.Its coming from Rosie’s p.o.v. Tell me what you think how I could improve it etc.
So I walked through the familiar hallways that led to the library. . It was eerie, haunting almost ,to see the school so quiet. It seemed that it wasn?t just people who succumbed to the virus but also the school itself . The only thing that hadn?t changed was my beloved library, its silent reverie was more natural. Seating myself in a plush swivel chair and dumping my bag , I watched the dusty computer whirr to life. I was now stuck, once I found the address how exactly would I get there? I couldn?t drive, public transport was out and if I was to get to the labs on time walking just wasn?t going to cut it . I closed my eyes and tried to still my racing mind. It wouldn’t do to worry, worry was illogical . I tensed. Something somewhere moved. Very, very slowly I opened my eyes, only enough to peer through, not enough to appear awake. I let my breathing slow . Out of the corner of my eye I saw him move. It was a him, I could tell that much. He was tall and lean , broad in the shoulders tapering to the waist.
? another sleeping beauty, made it to school though? he murmured to himself. My eyes snapped open at that, I knew that voice ! Everyone knew X, you couldn?t not know him- he was MR. popular in Oakville high not to mention heart throb of girls everywhere. He had it all -looks ,fitness and even I could tell he was charismatic.
?Holy sh*t !? he fell back, his mouth wide open. ?you?re awake! You?re awake! Why are you awake ? ?none of your business? I snapped, not exactly in the mood to hear some deluded idiot?s ramblings. I pushed myself out of the chair , scowling as I did so. ?well, if you?ll excuse me I have something rather important to attend to? ?oh yeah like what? A chess tournament? he drawled arrogantly ?You do realise that we are probably the only people awake on this planet? I was so close to walking up to him and breaking his pretty little nose. It must have shown on my face because he backed off slowly .
If you could also tell me what you think of the characters and their relationship.
X is supposed to come off as really conceited and arrogant and then as Rosie get to know him he gets nicer.Also this isn’t the start it’s just hacked out from the middle of the chapter

Sat, 19 Dec 2009 19:52:46 GMT

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