Open Question: Poem critique please?
This is kinda…well I don’t know exactly… please just tell me what you think. I’m not really sure if its a song or a poem so… interpret it however you would like. This sickness must be serious
I?m feeling quite delirious
Please tell me there?s a cure
Burry my heart in this cemetery of souls
I feel my mind burning like hot coals
Will this disease last forever?
Why isn?t there a cure?
For this disease I must endure
Just take me from this misery
I don?t know where to hide
In this hospital of lies
I feel as though the hospice is getting closer?
Closer, Closer!
Just wash my blood from your hands
My body nothing but dust and sand
Can?t you see? There?s nothing left of me
Nothing left of me?
I reposted this because I posted it when no one was really on, and just wanted more opinions
Tue, 04 May 2010 06:27:13 GMT
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This sickness must be serious
