Open Question: What do you think of the start of my story?
The darkness behind my eyelids was thick and stank of chemicals, as though someone had poured black oil inside my head. My tongue lay like a dead slug in my mouth, and my limbs to heavy to lift.
Had i been sick? Was i injured? Or…
My stomach sloshed, rebelling against the thought.
I couldn’t be dying, i was only 16 years old. Yet my skin itched with the coarseness of the unfamiliar sheets, and the mattress beneath me felt rubbery. The air was stale and lukewarm. Where else could i be but in the hospital?
As the oily slick across my senses thinned, colours and shapes crept into my awareness. Faint blue splashes of footsteps on tile, the dry buzz of air conditioning, a silken ribbon of murmurs outside my door. Muffled thumps from the end of the corridor felt like cotton puffs dropping onto my forehead, until they ended in a sandpaper rasp of,’nurse!’
I winced and opened my eyes.
I was lying alone in a room so stark that’s its blankness hit me like an assault. There was no IV stands or heart monitors, no bedside table covered in flowers and get-well cards. No windows, no cupboards, no shelves, not even a clipboard hanging on the wall. Nothing but the bend, and me in it.
My arms lay limp by my sides, skinny and white as ever. They looked whole enough, but the forearms were a mess of half-healed scratches and bite marks. My wrists were chaffed red, my fingernails were ragged stubs, and my grandmothers ring, a square-cut topaz i’d worn everyday for the past five years, was missing. I was staring at my bare finger when the door opened, and a women in petal pink scrubs came in. ‘Good Morning alison,’ she said brightly. ‘How are you feeling?’
Wed, 02 May 2012 19:26:58 GMT
Open Question: Creative Names for a Running Blog?
I am very much out of shape and have pretty much become a couch potato. I am going to start the couch to 5k running plan and wanted to start a running blog. I have never been a runner, but definitely want to become one. I want to be heart healthy and the push has come from the death of my father in laws from heart disease at the age of 59. Also, I have heart disease in my family as well and everything has recently become very real to me. So, any suggestions for names??
Wed, 02 May 2012 19:23:54 GMT
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