Open Question: How can i get this argument essay to at least a B?
i say the work smoking and smokers too much - but my english teacher said never to put they or them or it(to be really obvious)
How can i get this to a grade B???
also the conclusion is too long - i say things i meant to say earlier in the conclusion - but where should they be - they don’t fit in my 3 main points????? please help
Thank you
Smoking should be banned in England completely!
Our Country can be an unpleasant and dirty place to live. No matter where you go, you always come across someone smoking and this is a dangerous, dirty and expensive habit, which has no positive effects. I will discuss why I strongly Think smoking should be banned in England, and these are my reasons for wanting this: Firstly smokers are ruining their own health, secondly it?s bad for non-smokers health and thirdly, it is an expensive habit. These are my reasons for believing we should take action now!
The first problem with smoking is that it?s damaging smokers health and taking away their lives. Smoking has so many negative effects including lung and heart disease, circulation and respiratory problems and asthma. Each year England has 364,000 patients admitted to NHS hospitals due to smoking related illnesses. One of the main health problems with smoking is cancer and Cancer Research claims that 114,000 people are dying each year due to smoking related diseases. Pregnant woman who smoke are also running a big risk of damaging their babies? health; the poisonous chemicals go into the baby?s blood and this can result in a miscarriage, low birth weight or the baby being premature.
I get the impression that people who start smoking aren’t?t well educated or just don?t care about their own health, which is a course for concern. However I know a person who has an asthmatic daughter and is well educated, but despite having a daughter who is more prone to health problems, she still chooses to smoke around her, which I think is appalling.
Secondly non-smokers are having to inhale other people?s smoker just isn?t right. Scientisits have proven that passive smoking is extremely dangerous to non- smokers as the smoker only inhales 15% of the smoke and all the rest gets inhaled by the people around them. Passive smoking can cause serious health problems especially for those with allergies, heart of lung disease and for children and babies. An example of how dangerous passive smoking is, is Roy castle, a non ? smoker and entertainer who worked in bars and clubs for years and inhaled smoker through his work and was diagnosed with lung cancer and died as a result from it. Just the other day I was on my way to college and outside my local train station, there was a bunch of smokers there. I had no choice but to inhale the dirty smoke.
Ruining your own health is one thing but damaging non ? smokers health is just unacceptable.
And the final problem with smoking is that it?s expensive. The national health service is already in a terrible financial situation and they are having t give away thousands, not even knowing it will have any effect. The NHS spends on average

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